Wordy Wednesday (“Short Story-Writing Checklist”)

Right now several of my friends and I are in creative writing classes, focusing on short stories. I’ve never paid much attention to what goes into a short story–it’s not my favorite form of writing, so I pretty much only do it when I have to for a class or contest. However, lately I’ve found myself focusing more on what exactly you need to include in order to tell a complete, interesting story in about ten pages or less (mainly so that I can write my class assignments faster, then get back to working on novels) (or watching HGTV) (or both).

At this point I’ve ended up with a bit of a “must include in the story” checklist that I go over before turning in a short story. And since Writing Process won this week’s Wordy Wednesday poll, now you can use my nifty little Short Story-Writing Checklist, too. (You know. If you want to. If you don’t, that’s cool too.)

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1. At Least Two Conflicts

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It probably sounds obvious, but every story needs conflict, no matter the length. When it comes down to it, the definition of what makes a story a story is the conflict.

My rule of thumb is to try to include at least two conflicts in every situation: (1) the external and (2) the internal. The more layers of conflict I can squeeze in, the better.

For example: Suzie and Tommy might be arguing about where to go to dinner, but the underlying conflict between them is that they never agree on anything, so they’re thinking about breaking up. Meanwhile, Suzie has the internal conflict of the fact that she loves Tommy but he drives her insane, while Tommy’s struggling with the fact that he doesn’t actually love Suzie but he doesn’t want to break her heart by breaking up with her.

Boom. Four different conflicts, all happening within one argument. You’ve got a story.

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2. Keep Them Moving

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This is one that only just occurred to me about a week ago–a story needs movement. While it’s possible to write a good story in which the characters are just sitting on a park bench talking, you still need to have them move in little ways. Whether Suzie fixes her hair or Tommy taps out a rhythm on his knee, they need to move, and the movements need to mean something. It’s not about moving for the sake of moving, but moving to further the story.

Meanwhile, the larger the movement, the easier it is to hold on to the reader. This is sort of a chicken-and-the-egg kind of situation, with conflict, but if two characters are arguing while alone in a room (conflict), chances are one of them is going to pace, or slam her hand against the wall, or repeatedly sit down then stand back up again while making a point (movement). Basically: the louder the conflict, the bigger the movements. And the bigger the movements, the easier it is to grip the reader.

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3. Include Dialogue (And Multiple Characters)

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You can write a story that has absolutely zero dialogue in it, and it can be amazing. But I find that including dialogue (and therefore also having more than one character involved in the story) makes things a lot easier.

My general formula is to include two characters in a scene, and to write their dialogue solely addressing the surface conflict between them.

For example: In the case of Suzie and Tommy, their dialogue would revolve around where to go to dinner, not their possible future breakup. I keep dialogue focused on the surface conflict, then use the characters’ thoughts and movements to tell the underlying stories of the rest of the conflicts going on.

Plus, dialogue is a great place to establish and strengthen voice, which is muy importante in a short piece.

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4. Defined Setting

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I don’t know about you, but setting’s really important to me in stories. I like to be able to center myself in the scene–to know exactly what the characters are seeing and touching and smelling. Because short stories are, you know, short, that means you have less space to give your reader a memorable setting. So, I like to use settings that are easy to describe–ones that are probably already fairly defined in the reader’s mind: city streets, lake houses, small town parks, etc. These are things that we’ve probably all been exposed to before in some way, shape, or form, so we don’t need as many details to know what we’re looking at.

By using a well-known setting, you can cut down on the amount of description needed, adding to the amount of space you have to do the next step in crafting a defined setting: show how this setting is unique.

Instead of writing about just any old lake house, talk about how the porch sags, or the neighbors’ cottage is so close your protagonist can hear them arguing when the husband comes home drunk at two in the morning, or the water’s too cold to go swimming even in July.

If you’re writing genre fiction (scifi, fantasy, etc), try to begin with an ordinary setting that we all know fairly well (like a forest, diner, school, etc.) and then warp the smaller details to transform it into something unique.

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5. Back Story

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Back story is extremely important in short stories (and, of course, writing in general). To know where a character’s going, you need to know where they were before the story began, too. On the other hand, you don’t want to overload the reader with back story. Ultimately, you want to include just enough to give the reader a general idea of the Before without giving them the exact, nitty gritty details. And–returning to conflict, again–you want to include back story for all the different sub-conflicts you’ve got going on (unless one doesn’t have any back story, because it begins during your short story itself… in which case, you know, just skip this step).

Try not to give away your back story in info-dumping paragraphs, but rather just touch on it here and there in details. Like you can mention how Suzie is fixing her hair because Tommy ruffled it earlier, even though she knows that he knows that she hates it when he does that. Or Tommy could be tapping his fingers because he can’t get the song out of his head he was listening to earlier, which was on a love song playlist Suzie made for him–but this agitates him, because he knows he needs to break up with her, despite her good (or bad?) taste in music.

The more you can make your back story invisible by weaving it in with the story presently happening, the better. It’ll give you more depth/layers to play with and make your story feel much more like a 3D, this-is-actually-happening event, rather than just a random, five page assignment you had to turn in for class.

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And there you have it, my Short Story-Writing Checklist!

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~Julia

PS. Are there any other specific elements you look for in short stories, or make sure to include in your own? Share them in the comments–I’m always up for hearing more writing tips, and I’ve got plenty of short story-oriented classes to use them on in my future!

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11 thoughts on “Wordy Wednesday (“Short Story-Writing Checklist”)

  1. For me, the key is layering throughout. Sometimes I’ll write the major points – just exchanges of dialogue or broad plot points. I’ll then go back and add that underlying emotion. One thing I am trying to play around with is layering mood into scene descriptions – choosing adjectives that act not just as descriptors of the setting, but also as indicators of conflict and tone.

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    • That’s such a great idea! I do the same thing, with layering, when I write; I don’t do much revising once I’ve “finished” a story, but it goes through a lot of development while I’m working on the first draft.

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  2. This is so excellent! I find it incredibly difficult to write compelling short stories. Each of the points you mentioned above are things that, in one form or another, I’ve seen in the stories I’ve loved. I think I’ll have to print this list out so that I remember to return to it when I’m working on my next short.

    Thank you so much for posting! What are the hardest parts of writing a short story for you? Do you prefer shorts over novels?

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    • I’m glad you found it helpful! I prefer novels, but short stories have been growing on me, as I’ve been writing so many for school. Pacing’s one of my biggest issues–because I don’t plan things out ahead of time, it’s difficult to pace properly. But I’m working on that. 🙂 Thanks for commenting, and good luck with your short stories!

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  3. Some writers published writers will tell you that short stories are someone of the basics you´ll first have to learn. They do have the elements of a novel, the characters ..inner conflict outside conflict that changes him, dialogue, bla bla. Same thing, plus it´s actually harder because your trying to use these techniques, or not, in telling a story in a short format so you have to cram in everything quite minutely to make it a compelling read. It has it´s art. And you must keep them on your little folder because they will always or sometimes give you ideas for a scene in a novel or some other tool you can figure you can use.
    Stay frosty, keep writing, read ya.

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    • I find it interesting when people talk about short stories being the training wheels for novels, because it gives the impression that short stories aren’t anything more than a pit stop along the way to something better, which isn’t true. I mean, yes, mastering the short story will no doubt help you with mastering the novel as well, but they’re really two separate entities–and you can be good at writing novels, but not short stories, or vice versa. I don’t think one is more difficult than the other–they’re just difficult in different ways.

      But anyway. Thanks for sharing your opinion!

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  4. I’m actually better at short stories than novels (I’m hoping I make 50k this NaNoWriMo).
    I agree with everything you stated! Pointing out having several different conflicts and layers is a really helpful point. Definitely will remember that.

    When I write short stories, I often end up doing a good deal of revising later since most of my short stories are inspired by a prompt or picture, and I don’t plan them too much, just sort of write…I’m not sure if there really is any specific elements other than what you mentioned, but I’m going to be looking for them!

    Great post! 🙂

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    • I think everyone’s better at one or the other–and honestly, I’m definitely better at short stories than I am at novels. I just like novels better. 🙂

      Let me know when you find something! I’d love to hear your perspective.

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